something goes here.

i think if you replace the organ with a guitar, it would make a nice metal riff. try that and see how it sounds.

Good, but a little choppy towards the end...

But still very good. I see what you were trying to do, though;
it would take a trained ear to see that. Make it longer and I bet it would sound really cool and totally have the effect you were searching for.

Don't give up, I'm rooting for ya!

Lacks in the feeling of a "Road to Victory".

Much too short; the end is a lil choppy, which would hence make a not so hot loop in a movie/game; and as I said above, lacks the feel of a victory, let alone a ROAD to victory.

Nice try, and better luck with the next song of victory.

That could have been better...

it was okay but it could have been better. I suggest taking out the kick and snare and replace it woith somether else. and need to add a few more things.