I like the piano at the beginning - it sounds a bit square rhythmically, but the atmosphere and mixing effects help keep things interesting. The vocals at :26 are really nice, and that airy section flows nicely into the synth pads at :51. You may have overused the reverb a tad here, and the texture is still pretty thin during the climactic parts. The echoey synth riff at 1:36 is nice, but after a while it doesn’t have a very strong sense of direction. I felt like the piece was missing the dynamism in the composition that I usually look for. The atmosphere and sound design are both really nice here, and I enjoyed the production quality as well. I think the composition could use a little more fleshing out, and a stronger point of arrival with more memorable melodies and build-ups might help create that sense of direction. Still, solid work with the progression, instrumentation, rhythmic content, and mood. Keep at it, ImSoAlive! :)
Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.75/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.5/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
1/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.5/1
Composite score
8/10