This isnt bad. I would put this more as a hip-hop song when picking a genre. Dance is a subgenre of techno. Ex: Everytime We touch by Cascade.
I am not perfect but I am good at picking out mistakes as I am deaf to my own and not others.
What I disliked:
Kick was too loud. Make it loud enough so people can choose how hard it hits on their own systems.
There's a lack in variety.
What I like:
Hot beat
Structure
Good sound
Authenticity to trap music.
It may not be perfect but it's very good.
xoedoxo 
