Guess you dont music not for so long so here are the criteria for this song:
Ride is too loud, some basses have harsch frequencies, drum pattern is not perfect (its not every bar, bit kinda off), no subbass, saws chords are too quiet, there are too much high-frequencies and the drop is very weird for me, the buildup is not powerful enough and you could some variations for the basses (I mean not always the same basses)
Conclusion:
Make your basses less harsch, the drum pattern should have no offset, use not so much white-noise and make your ride quieter, add that SUBBASS and make your drop less weird.
But good try making dubstep :)))