Good idea, but poorly mixed. Those risers (like the one at 0:01 and every time they repeat) are too loud and is really problematic as the track progresses because it causes a lot of clash with your other sounds and mud in the low end. Those white noise (impacts? idk) like at 0:30 are too loud as well. Also make sure to highpass your chord synths, they are creating some mud in the low end. The kick at the drop (1:44) is distorting a lot. I think the entire track is clipping or over compressed, make sure that the track doesn't go over 0dB!