Sounds like a happy song :)
Something inspirational for a brighter future. Just had an emotion that really wanted to express it'self today I guess. Let me know whatcha think. ~Jxudo
Sounds like a happy song :)
Could be better a lot in my opinion. I think something wrong happened with the impact at 0:20? A lot of mud in the bass at 0:22-0:40. The kick really clashes with the bass, the kick is barely audible. I would suggest sidechaining other sounds to the kick and slightly bring out the high end of the kick with eq to give it more punch. The snare could also be brought out more a bit. The guitars sound great but they are too loud. You can also use a highpass eq for the guitars to get rid of some of the mud. The silence and abrupt change in tempo at 1:38 doesn't sound right. The composition also sounds really generic and the progression stays the same throughout the entire track. Silence is good sometimes but too many sudden pauses make the listener lost and it ruins the pace of the track sometimes. I believe with a lot of practice you can improve a lot though! Don't give up!
Thank you, really appreciate comments like these that actually give feedback. I made this track in about 2 hours. I have a tendency to release a track too soon for fear I may never finish it haha. I've been making music on here for 11 years yet I still don't really know how to do much of the advanced stuff. I'm self taught with most everything I know. Comments like these are very much appreciated. Thank you.
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