I'm only giving 4.5 because the start of the dinging tune was introduced abruptly overall was great and perfect for a combat seen of a game shall i say.... MADNESS (ps this feels more like an old trance than a dnb)

NIC3 :)

But its not Drum n Bass though.

It's Like Trance or Something Back from the 2000s on NG

I feel a lot of potential here, what you got so far is pretty good I love the industrial vibe.

Nice panning bass, I can tell you've practiced with fl studio a lot. I like the little buildup background noises helps create and ease the tension.

Sometimes the drums don't hit quite right to me, around the 20 second mark and the 50 second mark. Also the drum samples are kinda meh, they sound like the stock samples. You can get some free drum packs online, and then make sure to always run them through the mixer. @ 59 the little lead synth doesn't key up, but later in the song it sounds better somehow. the sound it'self is good but maybe play with note selection a bit more, or even use the fine tuning for the pitch on the vst used to make it.

Anyways, pretty good overall man keep it up and rock on.