some transitions are too sudden, the drop is made from samples and loops, the build is weird as hell
i like the second part of the drop, but its missing an 808 so it can be like mix of dubstep and hybrid trap
so thats it pretty much

it may be a meme song but still a honest review can help u if u wanna do some real stuff :)

if only the snare in verse (r whatever this part is called, just in the part after intro and breakdown) was different, it'd be deffinitelly better. The snare juust don't fit there imo. And I love the 2nd part of the 1st drop. Have you ever thought about trying to make a hybrid trap song? I think it might go well, the part sounds like after some editting could be turned into a real hybrid trap same in 2nd of the 2nd drop. Just other snare, hi hat pattern and 808 and boom, base for a hybrid trap track. Later just some fx, vocals, maybe whomp basses.