Agreed with adr3, interesting intro, simple and additive, simple transition with a pause then impact, my ears wanted to hear a slight variation in the chord progression, adding a Dmajor chord on the beat 4 of the last measure of your progression just every once in a while would have added a welcome little spice.
THat transition into the main beat i wouldve loved a small uplifter, or at least a crash or downlifter at the beginning. Your melodies are slow, but so is the song. I really wanted to hear a bit more variation by 1:21, and especially some variation in the chord structure.
this is very pleasant to listen to, almost does seem like you just messed around on a keyboard in the key of g minor, likging the rhythmic change up at 2:20, very welcome change of pace here.
I wouldve loved to see a bit more variation and change up of the chord structure, i know you only did it in 5 days, but im judging everything the same!
Its slow, calm, simple, and pleasant and that already has a lot going for it, but for active listening, i wanted more. as a background piece, its pretty good!
well done and thanks for the submission to the NGUAC!