I love it
I love it
Great intro! right up into the main melody. Love the repeated chromatic lead and the way you utilize it as a little build up/hook. LOVE the bass lines i feel like you are a bass player.
Just, GREAT transitions up until 1:50. I loved your instrumentation up to this point but the string synths just don't do it for me. I mean even from the beginning it had a very 90's synth vibe but those strings could've been swapped with another cheesy voice just the same. I really just don't like the strings until they're layered with everything in the climax.
Man im really digging your transitions, and your breakdown right back into a full climax, especially at the 3:00 minute mark, really clear climax and i just love the instrumentation here.
I cant get over this hook its so good.
I love the use of band passes in your transitions, and even though you dont bring the music down to a softer point for very long, you execute it well. I can see this in a 90's video game.
Over all, very unique, and you executed a quirky and sporadic piece very well, I just wish that you took some different instrumental choices just like adr3 said, maybe take some time to design your own!
There seems to be some kind of clipping on your kick in the intro.
Overall, nice, quirky sound going on here, very interesting, sometimes cheesy lead synth choices. I like your hook throughout.
You could do with a lot less reverb on your synths. I'd take it down half again. Or at least modulate it.
Percussion elements on bigger sections are pretty buried in the mix. I would turn everything else down and compress the individual instruments harder. At 3:01 they're almost totally buried until those chorus synths fall off the top.
Transitioning here is a lot cleaner than last time around, and you bring an interesting presentation all around, with lots of little sparkling touches. I would probably recommend staying away from some of the more preset-y sounding synths and taking more time to design your own sounds, or modulate or apply FX to taste. That's really my biggest gripe. Some transitions with FX felt a little clumsy, but you're getting the hang of things, and this is great for only having two weeks to work on a piece. Starting out, I know I'd take forever.
I don't have any critique for writing as per the notes themselves. You handled that very well, and I really enjoyed your presentation throughout. The instruments, modulation, etc, are really my only gripes.
Thanks for coming out to NGUAC!
Todo un crack, suena muy bien, sigue así eres un compositor excelente....
Oh my goodness... THIS IS AMAZING! I love the sounds and the beat so much, I will use it in geometry dash if it works
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