Interesting choice panning out your percussion elements in the intro left and right.

This piece has a catchy little hook. My complaints would be largely reserved for mix. Your snare and kick are buried in the mix. I would turn down any saws on the sides and cut down on your reverbs. Beyond that, the piece itself holds together nice and solid. Key change works well. We keep a lot of the same elements and nexus keys, etc, but they're not offensive at all.

By cut the reverb, I mean cut the wet signal down and try low cutting up to say 250 hz. You can also take reverb down on the larger, louder sections. When compressed these signals will cloud up your mix and make it hard to make out percussion and other instruments.

Overall, good piece. Enjoyed the listen. Thanks for coming out to NGUAC!