Well im not going to do my review in russian hahaha cause it would just be thrown into google translate.
Firstly, i LOVE the characters in the translation and I love the personality throughout the whole song. Really great Ideas all throughout, and after throwing ADR3's review into google translate, I fully agree with nearly everything he said.
The guitars tone just dont sound quite spot on for me, they sound like the synth guitars in the old doom soundtrack. thats not a BAD thing, but they werent overall mixed well along with the drums when everything is happeneing. I love the sound of the guitars muted however, that was cool like in the section at 1:08, i loved that whole section until the organ like synth comes in, that particular synth i just feel doesnt fit the song very well. the synth at 1:24 is GREAT. I love the dialogue in between the sections and how those are used AS transitions allmost, love the style of all of this. Albeit i cant understand russian haha. now, sometimes the vocals are hard to even hear over everything, except when i CAN hear them over everything, then i cant hear everything else very well. Utilizing some smart arrangement can help, get rid of instruments in the same register as whatever vocals are active at the moment. Many many many metal bands design their songs entirely around the vocal register of their singer.
The drums are pretty good, however the snare has a little too much reverb, sidechaining might come in handy for the kick when there is a lot going on, and maybe layer or add some more effects to your snare. i know this isnt edm, so in this case you want one drum, but i wanted that snare to punch me in the face more, ITS ROCK. Making it cut through the mix could be as simple as adding reverb delay, some slight sidechain compression, or just cleaning up the other voices that are doing things in the same register as the punch tone, around 250-350.
Other than that not much else, i love the style and the personality throughout!