I like the emotional appeal and atmosphere at the beginning. The breathy vocals are cool, but I would've liked to hear a little more fill in the texture around them. Otherwise, it's easy to lose the sense of the progression. The lyrics themselves are really neat, though, and the furtive outro with the echo-y piano is nice. Overall, I think the arrangement could use a little more fleshing out, and the texture is pretty minimal for my tastes, but you guys nailed the sound design and atmosphere. Keep at it! ^_^