I love those harmonies on the hooks, simple but so suitable here... carries the mood well. The beat seems minimalistic but there's so much nuance there in the background too, love the atmosphere.

The vocals though... or maybe more so the delivery: find it a bit hard to catch the lyrics with the hooks in particular. After 'I gave you every single reason to run'... just can't make out the second part? I like the vocals but clarity maybe... could be better. May be something with the filter/mix more so than the annunciation too, not sure.

Dope vibe otherwise. Sad but... soulful.

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Catching up on my backlog of yours I've missed, you got tight lyrics and a fun beat but i guess if you want feedback there's parts of the vocal track that feel like they need some EQ or adjustment to place itself into the beat a little better than just some added reverb

This is legit one of my favourite songs right now, the drop for the chorus gets me 𝒆𝒗𝒆𝒓𝒚 time, ths production is so smooth as well, this is amazing, I can't believe that this is just the demo

I was sleeping in this song now I’m sleeping with it. I don’t know what advice to give but I’ve listened to it so many times I dig it big time

Hmmm. Well I can't give you expert-quality feedback as someone who doesn't compose music, but I will say that I personally think the song might have either too much percussion or the volume of it needs to be toned down a bit. That's just me though, everyone's hearing sensitivity is different. Otherwise I think the song is good, maybe not exactly my cup of tea in terms of style or tone, but it's mostly up to on whether you're satisfied with the product. It's important to make music you like to make, not necessarily what your listeners enjoy. :)