The concept of the song is cool but I don't think the mix is up to it's potential. I think there need to be some volume adjustments, especially with that sweeper in the beginning because it was too loud. Another thing I noticed was the drop was getting really muddy. Mainly this is from the sub bass being stereo. If it was mono I don't think this would be a problem. And on that note, never make your sub basses stereo, for a few reasons, but mainly it does weird stuff to monitors. And along with that sub being stereo, it's barely audible. If it was mono, I don't think there would be a problem. The kick is not pleasent in the drop. Eq some of the low ends of it and bring those up, or add another sub kick. The snare is not loud enough. Overall that's realy all I have to say. Nice job buddy. Keep it up.