I love the chords, but honestly the melody just sounds like random notes. There is some obvious structure to it but no melodic journey. I would probably bump the bpm up a bit too (depending on where you take the melody) unless the anime is going to have a sad/contemplative theme. I also agree with @Aleysis that there needs to be something alongside the piano. Some celli would add a lot to this.
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It... needs work imo. Please comment, even pointing out negative things is good for this audio.
Belthagor responds:
It does? I used arp for the melody so it should sound very structured? O.O
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