This seems like another uncooked track. I fear the EQ on those drums you did does more harm than good - Instead of helping the vibe, it more interferes with it.
In other words; fill up the drums, make 'em meatier. Complicate it up. It confuses and messes with the vibe of the chords to put what you have right now on top - it feels wrong to my ear.
Author Comments
This is a reupload of my track "omit" on my old soundcloud account.
original track: https://soundcloud.com/jasdow/omit
Actually good!
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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
