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UPDATE:

Thank you for clarifying. It's now easier to see what you were trying to do.

While I can now see your intent more clearly, IMO it still falls a little short, mainly in the "silly" parts of the piece. I think you could have gone further with the instrumentation and made the circus feel a little more unwelcoming.

Original 3 1/2 Star Review:

"This has an ominous vibe to it, more so in the first 30 seconds or so. Some of the effects, like the dentist drill-type sound FX (around 17-18 seconds in) do a great job setting the atmosphere as legitimately creepy and unsettling.

Then the rest of the song comes in at almost exactly 30 seconds. The very real creepy vibe becomes a cartoon.

I'll give you the benefit of the doubt on this one, since I don't know your intent.

However, I think it would be helpful if you added in your description what your intent and thought process was. That way, I may be able to provide better feedback, a more accurate rating, and a generally more helpful review based more on how clear I thought your intent came through as opposed to purely my own taste.

One thing I'm not quite sure about is the song's thumbnail artwork. Could you elaborate on that?

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