When I first heard this, I was quite impressed. The drone and the first opening chords are gorgeous. I appreciate the drone getting louder after 30 seconds. It was a little awkward when it just stopped, but overall I really enjoy this one. The clicking and the strings playing closer to the bridge is a favorite sound of mine. The overall structure is what I would like to do with my own work. I love how the beauty falls apart at the end. That bass line at 1:45 really blends well into that industrial style of yours. It's really cool to hear these notes in this setting. Ontologically, this is how I view music in the natural world. Although these sounds at the end can make people uncomfortable, the ending in all music reflects that we are all going to die is made obvious when you write it in these tones. It reminds me of the following: “Art should comfort the disturbed and disturb the comfortable.”― Cesar A. Cruz
Thank you