I really like the concept

it is pretty raw tho and I wish u would remake this.....

ASU

No se entiende ni pito lo q se escucha asi no suena la compusicion del verdadero no apestas aesa musica ala firme

Ouch

I can hear what your trying to do. The melody is there. It's just the distorted guitar is making my hears bleed. Its way too harsh. Tone that down a bit, either use a different instrument or pitch it down.

Sounds a bit gritty...

But at the very least, I can still hear the song. Good job anyway