I really like the concept
it is pretty raw tho and I wish u would remake this.....
No se entiende ni pito lo q se escucha asi no suena la compusicion del verdadero no apestas aesa musica ala firme
I can hear what your trying to do. The melody is there. It's just the distorted guitar is making my hears bleed. Its way too harsh. Tone that down a bit, either use a different instrument or pitch it down.
Sounds a bit gritty...
But at the very least, I can still hear the song. Good job anyway
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.