I'l tell you exactly what you need to write in your description if you want better feedback: Your thought process. This means what thought you put into the piece, its title, and what you were trying to do with it. Without this information, I'm forced to judge based on my own taste, rather than how clearly your intent came through.

I do like the piece, although it is short. I want to provide better feedback, but as it is now, I can't.

More info about how I review music here: https://codefreq.newgrounds.com/news/post/1089806