Wow

aesthetic vibes man

good job man this was a very nice listen i enjoy the atmosphere

10/10 for idea, not so good with the execution.

What you tried to create had (and has) potential to turn into one one of the best songs to ever exist imo, but you need to work a bit with the mixing of the sepaate sounds. This is the case when theoretically everything should be fine, melodies are top notch, every sound is amazing by itself, but the problem arises in the moment when you put it all together.

First of all this pretty-much white noise in the background just isn't fit for this kind of song, though it's mostly noticable in the baeginning. After the song picks up, it's not really so weird anymore. And while it's true that it is a decent way of filling in the background so that it's not empty, that doesn't mean it's necessarily the way to go here. I'm having lot sof problems like that myself.

Also the way you made the sounds, they became... "limited", they feel incomplete, and sometimes a bit unclean. It's not that noticable, but it ceratainly doesn't allow this track to grow as much as it should. The general idea was of course great, it makes the song really seem more "sleepy", as if from a different world almost.

There are just some more minor problems with the mixing, but overall it's a really amazing track. I'm harsh because I see potential that goes high to the starts here :3

PS: this can be definitely a very very personal opinion on the matter :)

pls let me sleep ZzZzZzZzZ