My opinion: I think this is an interesting loop.

It makes me think of a hypothetical NES game featuring Hermes the bureaucrat from Futurama. There's a certain whimsical, monotonous quality to it.

I think I could provide better feedback if you added your thought process and any intent you had when creating this song into its description. That way I can judge how clearly I thought your intent came across as opposed to judging purely by my own taste. In turn, this could also affect my rating.

More info about how I review music here: https://codefreq.newgrounds.com/news/post/1089806