Well it wasnt at all a bad song its just that it seamed like you made a few minor mistakes that could easily be fixed. Like the hi hats just seamed to be completly off beat and doing whatever they wanted and going against the rest of the song. Also something you could do to make it better would be to get rid of the small empty spots where the synth isnt playing. And I dont mean where you put it in on purpose but in the chorus part. But overall it was a pretty good song with just a few bad spots so I voted 3. Good job.