I like the moody piano riffs at the beginning and the airy vocals. There are some moments where the mix still seems a little spotty, like with the overuse of reverb at 1:07, 4:12, and a couple of other places. The robotic-sounding drop at 1:45 really takes the piece in a refreshing new direction, and I like all the vocal effects and variety in the compositional details here. The pacing is a little slow at times, and the instrumentals during the verses are pretty minimal. I thought the emotional piano riff at the end felt a little out-of-place after the groovy rhythmic drops. I also think the piece needed a bit more directionality towards the end - it's already quite long at that point, and there's essentially no new vocal content in the second half. Still, I admire your commitment to improving past tracks. This piece is a little rough around the edges imho, but the sound design and danceability are more than enough to keep me engaged. Keep at it, guys! ^_^
Author Comments
This is a collab I did with Steelside in 2017. I decided to revisit it again in 2020 and give it a proper arrangement featuring brand new sections and an entirely new mixdown. I hope you like it!
Credits:
Lyrics and vocals by Steelside aka WuLF REiGN
Production by MegaSphere
Lyrics:
[verse 1]
Why ya gotta ask me if I'll stay again?
Ya know I'll never leave you alone.
If God had the words he'd stay so quiet then.
'Cause even he can't make this damn angel moan.
A slave to your lust, addicted to my touch and I know
And I know you love it.
Take a hit, take a sip, I don't really give a shit
If it makes it easier to want it.
'Cause as long as we're alone, I'll make sure that we get home
'Cause I know, yeah I know, yeah I know.
[prechorus]
But ya tell me to hate you and I can't.
Then ya tell me to unleash and I can't.
'Cause this beast ain't one you wanna see, ya tell me good, I wanna cry I wanna bleed.
Ya tell me fuck me like you hate me, I'll do whatever you want.
[chorus]
Damn girl, damn girl you're crazier than I thought you were.
Damn girl, damn girl you're crazier than I thought you were.
Talking 'bout out lives and our futures, girl you can't be real I shoulda told her
Damn girl, damn girl you're crazier than I thought you were.
But I like it though.
this is awesome :D
Sounds really cool !
Also, I still love the "I'm very mature for my age" meme
Credits & Info
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4.57 / 5.00
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- 2:35 AM EDT
- Genre
- Hip Hop - Modern
- File Info
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- 13.4 MB
- 6 min 9 sec
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