Alright, I'll try my best to judge this.
Beginning is quite cool, nice atmosphere and such. Buildup is a bit messy but quite good nonetheless, transition from buildup to drop feels rushed and could use more clarity (it doesn't feel much like a transition) but it still works. Drop is good but mixing is OK at best and it gets repetitive. The break feels a little out of place but I absolutely LOVE the second buildup. It's really spooky and sets a great tone for the second drop, which to me is a little better than the first. There are also some odd timings within the song too that are quite interesting, and the ending is good too. Overall, nice work! Looking forward to seeing more from you in the future.

Very heavy