Very nice

Now while this is very short you bring some reall good vibe and quality to this piece, and seems to me that this should be its own song and you would need to really make it longer to do that and bring in much more different sounds to ad to it, but it would do great as its own song and not just a clip.

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Needs to be longer like its own song.

~X~

cool

Reminds me of ParagonX9s tracks, the beginning and the kicking strt sound great. After that it really doesn't advance that much, this could use a little reworking, adding some heavier beat, other instruments, etc. It could turn into a real masterpiece, keep up the good work!

-cd-