Not much is happening

Not much is there to keep you interested.
It's lacking a bass-line, the drums are bland and repetitive (seeing as they don't follow a 4/4 beat they should vary more) and that distorted synth (I'm guessing from sytrus) is VERY harsh on the ears.

Also, it seems like it's a form of down-tempo music, not Techno. Revise your genre's a bit more.

The idea you've portrayed in this song screams a form of chill-out music with soft strings and brushed drums.
It's an okay idea but... if anything... because you're trying to make a genre that you don't have alot of knowledge in it's ruined it.

Sorry for sounding harsh if I have... it's just the way I swing. :]

~BenA.