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Þo Zöʒe Ĵvvökl Ëdéöjegï

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This is my first ever song I created. It may not be good, but it's something. I was just experimenting and placing random notes. Criticize so I can improve.


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BPM: 128

Length: 2:38

Genre: Experimental

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I'm hearing a lot of good stuff in here. The intro has a nice buildup and I like the synths you use. Of course, it would be really cool to hear more mid-tones (filler sounds if you think it works) to counteract the emptiness between the drums and the synths. I would also say the same for the second part with the beats. It helps (for me) to focus on the important beats and emphasize them with chords or a good arp. In the third part with the key/beat change, I'm not sure what you're going for, but if you wanted to go for a sort of breaking-down, uncanny feeling, it might be more impactful with some sort of bass tone as well as a stronger transition into that part - (especially since you seem to be doing a beat drop from the previous part. But honestly, I like that you have definitive parts to the song, it makes it dynamic. I guess just work on transitions in general :) Pretty cool

yoshster061 responds:

Thank you for the feedback, this really helps me out for the future. I'm so gad that you put time into criticism of my first song. I honesty didn't even know what to expect from my first song. I'm at least glad there were parts that you liked, and parts where you gave me feedback. I just really appreciate it. Thx so much man; I'll take your feedback into consideration for next time. :)


~~~~yoshser061

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Uploaded
Apr 4, 2020
10:18 PM EDT
Genre
Experimental
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6.1 MB
2 min 39 sec

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