When I first heard this track on your Bandcamp it immediately captured my whole attention. The melodies are so beautiful. That vocal mix in the background is spectacular stuff that made the track much more fabulous. There something about your way and method of using progressions that stood out the most from many electronic composers, and I feel like a lot of those musicians lack of this ability to convey music with the feeling. Strangely enough, I find that certain people on this site capable of this skill. But still, your work is something else.

This is so well done. Thanks for making it.

Pretty good. Not much too say . Just keep the main parts sticking out the best you can and try to center it more