Nice soundtrack nothing needs to improve in my opinion
The first part is inspired by camellia. The second part is like a psytrance. And then it become a hardcore. The next of hardcore, I don't know what is the name of this genre... but I like this kind of music. I think the the outro is bad..
+ ) I said that I will upload a remix, but I threw it away.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.