Hey, nice to see another music producer which uses LMMS.
This is quite good work, I like the build-up and transitions and the small fast percussion which you added around 0:50. I like the instrument around 01:35, but I feel like in some parts it doesn't seem to completely fit with the other melodies and instruments if you listen very closely, I don't know if you can hear the same but perhaps you can give it a listen a few times to see if you can fix it. I like the drowsy feeling at the beginning of this track and how you generally built up all the different instruments in this track.
Good work