I like the dark, distorted guitars at the beginning. The atmosphere is great here, but by comparison the vocals sound a little thin and robotic. I like the crisp beats during the verses and the filtering work at :57. The piece has a nice sense of flow, but I think it needed to be a little more dynamic toward the end to hit it home. Overall, lot of potential here. Mixing and sound design are really strong. The vocals just needed a little more punchiness and variety imo. Keep it up, guys! ^^

There must be some reason your making music, hopefully because you enjoy it
That being i really dug this, the background instrumental and vocals are great, the mix sounds good too maybe some elements could be tweeked. The vocal delivery and rhythm are what make the track for me though, really nice work