the mix needs an overhaul, i don't like how random notes spike in volume suddenly. overall melody is not bad, i'd say it needs a little more in the way of composition to really make this a PIECE piece
This is the sequel to my first track, Ascension, remastered and redone. Hope you enjoy! :)
the mix needs an overhaul, i don't like how random notes spike in volume suddenly. overall melody is not bad, i'd say it needs a little more in the way of composition to really make this a PIECE piece
Thanks for the feedback!
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