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What Are You Fighting For (Vocal Demo)

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One of my first attempts at vocals and I'm pretty happy with it.


Lyrics:


Mistake

its done

your blind eyes cant see

victory far gone

Pain your pain

with no mercy your end

hope is foreign

I'm sick of the irrelevance

and your ignorance

a disease a cancer

disrupting the balance with your prescence


what are you fighting FOOOOOORR


empty alone

sacrifice the life you were given for nothing

falling your lies

mortality was a promise you have forgotten

bloodshed for lies

lives are broken brothers born into nothing

souls that mean something they take everything


what are you fighting FOOOOOOORR


Update 2/28/2020 - Remixed, cut out alot of harsh frequencies and reworked drum mixing as well

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Killer! I’m digging the vocals man. You should lay down some backing screams on the collab we’re working on bro! I think it’d sound killer. Loving everything I’ve heard from you so far 👊🏻

I like the heavy guitar sound. Also the growly sound of your vocals are great, but when you hit "foooor" you're quite out of tune with the instruments. Depending on what you try to achieve, I would work on improving that. But really good job for a first attempt. I guess if I'd try that I wouldn't be able to speak for about a week.

EclipseProduction responds:

That's interesting because I'm trying to think how else I could do that but not sure what note I should hit. But yeah I haven't practiced vocals in a long time, so this started out as "just for fun" and then I realized they don't sound as bad as I thought they would lol. Appreciate the feedback!

vocals could be toned down but overall really good

EclipseProduction responds:

After listening a few times I think you're right. Thanks!

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Score
4.91 / 5.00

Uploaded
Feb 25, 2020
4:53 PM EST
Genre
Heavy Metal
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4.2 MB
3 min 5 sec

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