Killer! I’m digging the vocals man. You should lay down some backing screams on the collab we’re working on bro! I think it’d sound killer. Loving everything I’ve heard from you so far 👊🏻
Author Comments
One of my first attempts at vocals and I'm pretty happy with it.
Lyrics:
Mistake
its done
your blind eyes cant see
victory far gone
Pain your pain
with no mercy your end
hope is foreign
I'm sick of the irrelevance
and your ignorance
a disease a cancer
disrupting the balance with your prescence
what are you fighting FOOOOOORR
empty alone
sacrifice the life you were given for nothing
falling your lies
mortality was a promise you have forgotten
bloodshed for lies
lives are broken brothers born into nothing
souls that mean something they take everything
what are you fighting FOOOOOOORR
Update 2/28/2020 - Remixed, cut out alot of harsh frequencies and reworked drum mixing as well
I like the heavy guitar sound. Also the growly sound of your vocals are great, but when you hit "foooor" you're quite out of tune with the instruments. Depending on what you try to achieve, I would work on improving that. But really good job for a first attempt. I guess if I'd try that I wouldn't be able to speak for about a week.
EclipseProduction responds:
That's interesting because I'm trying to think how else I could do that but not sure what note I should hit. But yeah I haven't practiced vocals in a long time, so this started out as "just for fun" and then I realized they don't sound as bad as I thought they would lol. Appreciate the feedback!
vocals could be toned down but overall really good
EclipseProduction responds:
After listening a few times I think you're right. Thanks!
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4.85 / 5.00
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- 3 min 5 sec
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