i thought it was really good...especially the middle/end..
The beginning and aw a bit quite and lost me, but when you were singing a bit louder, it sounded really nice. Even for just a guitar and singer, this song's real nice. ending really wraps up the beggining, good job on that.
The beginning was a little iffy, but then i heard the power in your voice and was like, "ZOOOMG!"
I would advise going up the octave for the verses, we can hear you groveling for some of the lower notes, but the chorus and the bridges are wonderful.
need a little polishing on the lyrics in the beginning and sound a little louder and clearer over the vocals. Great effort though, my biggest piece of advice is that you really don't need to try to go baratone sining it like yo would another son would be fine.
it pull off by a girl im inpress
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