For your first...
...if this is really your first song you've made then you seem to have a innate understanding of the ambient music genre. It's a very good attempt. You've got lots of good layers going on. I would change the delay effect up a bit. Maybe use a manual delay, meaning that you play the instrument again yourself but at a progressively lower volume or random volume. Sometimes I get clipping or distortion but I've noticed that happen when I upload things here... it may be the transfer the site does. Also more dynamic usage of syncopation would give you a more original less mechanical sound. But then again, non vegetable midnight circuses may be mechanical...
My inspiration comes from:
http://bushofghosts.wmg.com/home.php - Probably the best album I have as far as inspiration goes.
I'm curious as to your influences and inspiration.
This is my first track ever. I have a friend who produces way longer than me and i learned much from him. I would really like to learn more about that manual delay and dynamic usage of syncopation.
Yeah me knows, the quality of the song get less if you upload it hear. It suksorz.
My inspiration for a lot of things is pretty much everything i go thru in life, nice and sucky stuff. But sometimes my inspiration comes from totally irrelevant things like koala's n stuff.
My influences are mostly from The Knife and Aphex Twin. Also a lot of other stuff, but those are the ones i'm focusing on the most lately.
Well thank you for your review, i appreciate it.