sweet.
nice work. wish I knew how to make music.
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I met a few goals this song. I think it came out well, please review! :D
Love it!
Great song. at the begining it had sort ofa eurotrance feeling to it. it just lacks the awesome voice. ending comes to a slooow death. i prefer a quick 1 3 5 1 cadence or something :P i really like this song, never heard it before. do remember to show me your new stuffsh.
AlexanderZero responds:
1 3 5 1 would probably not fit :P
Wow
The name matches the song. It's got the right ammount of everything. This deserves a download.
AlexanderZero responds:
It's not my best, but thanks ^_^
Good start
Its a good start but it lacks complexity and seems to wander randomly about. I had this same problem when i began composing and the solution is just more experience. Try to work on the undermelody and make it "go somewhere." Also, take a look at what voices your using and make sure they flow together. At some points, the voices didn't mix very well and other points the song switched between two voices without any kind of transition. Keep composing though, you're doing good!
take a look at my songs and tell me/review them! spkid64
AlexanderZero responds:
You should be less condescending when you write reviews, lest you want to come off as a jerk:
"I had this same problem when i began composing and the solution is just more experience."
...right. You're the guru whose been writing music for longer than me because you checked. I've been submitting music since 2005 (on my old account, poo-on-you, which I dont use any more). On my two newgrounds accounds I've submitted 49 songs over the course of almost three years. While the song is a little repetitive, it hardly wanders about randomly. Every phase was calculated and mastered with care, I hardly feel that the song goes nowhere.
By the way, I will keep composing, but it's an ironic thing to say since there's a good chance I've been composing for longer than you.
ver good
like it alot even if its not my style of music =p
5/5 10/10
AlexanderZero responds:
Thanks ^_^
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