Not quite

It was kind of repetitive and sounded out-of-tune. If you worked on it more, it could be something. If you want a relaxing sound, you could have the guitar play a simple one-note-at-a-time melody and have the rest of the instruments provide the beat, kind of like a harp arrangement. I'm no expert, but I believe that might do the trick.

-GG

Nah

This isn't very good. Sorry to be such a prick or whatever.

sounds "monotone"

ok beat, but 3:45 of same shit over and over

Pretty Good...

i liked it.... i like the tunes you are using... it sounds great, match p perfectly, but i dont really have a feeling into this song... anyways, keep up on what you are doing

Cheers