Good @$$ work!!!

This is VERY unique! I like everything about this song! Kinda feels like I'm running down a dim endless hallway with steaming pipes here and there (Ha! I'm talkin bout the Toxic 3 demo sound effect!) Despite its demo flaw, to me it actually fits perfectly with the song. Nice Work!!!

Needs work, but it's coming

The entry is too weak. Non linear percussion drags down the halfway decent synth stabs. The song as a whole could be considered atmospheric trance but there isn't really much flow to the song. It has the feel of a "tacked together" song, like dsamples where layed down with no variance or melody.

Add a defined trance stab and stick with it. Something catchy.

Add a simple percussion theme, and add more complicated breakdowns later.

After this add your bass to tie down the track.

Keep working on it!

hmm....

Toxic 3 only works if you buy it. (the noise every couple of seconds) Other than that, its okay.