Much better than my first.

I remember my first, just a bunch of sounds sequenced together...wasn't even music much more like death to your ears.

You got something here, with some time(i know it seems like its gotta be alot of that when you start off) and frustration(that too) this could be a great song.

Not bad for a first song

I remember my song - wasn't even rhythmic. Just some drums and a sample copy-and-pasted in WavePad. No sequencer, no FL Studio - the horror. At least you have a stable start. The bass is sweet; sounds like one of the house setups for FL Slayer. Nice sound to it. The drums are cool, too - but the scratching was a tad scatalogical, and wore on me a little bit. Everything else was pretty good. Peace.
- Ph. P (New song - "Hangin' by the Beach")

really dont be so hard on yourself

its pretty nice, but in the future try and build on the melody more, like add another instrument in.

still , great for your first time!

my comment

it aint that i quite like it 4/5 8/10