That was wack
I can tell that your useing FL Studio which is not a bad thing it's that you did not put much effort into this loop. You put premade loops together, all I'm saying is that you need to experence more with the premade loops you used in this, and mix it up a little. I loved the tune but put more effort into your music. And don't blam this if it dosent help just your music needs help.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.