It has a nice upbeat feel to it, could use some work cleaning up the synths. There's some overlapping frequencies causing distortion at 0:50 - 1:00, and for the rest of the track I'd recommend having treble and bass synths playing simultaneous with a wide range of frequencies to get a fuller sound. There's some more distortion at 1:47, and the ending just kind of happens without anything anticipating it or resolving the synths.
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i am bad at deciding genres
original creation date - 10/20/2019
Super-shape responds:
thank you for your review. unfortunately i am not skilled enough to know what any of this means so i don't really find most of this criticism to be that helpful. on another note, i am fully aware that the ending was rushed and it was done like that because i spend more time on songs that i am proud of. i was hesitant to upload this song for related reasons.
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