Here's Part Two. Hmm... the ambient pad kinda overpowers the song. (sigh) Oh well.
Hey not a bad song :)
i could actually feel some emotion...from 1:22 was probably my favaurite piece whan the light synth kicks in. Has that feeling of someone trying to hold on.
Nice touch ^^
the drums could have been a little heavier to coincide with the pads which do seem to overpower the song. but hey not a bad mix!
thanks for your reviews on my songs! as promised i'm voting a 9 and saying that this is a good piece!
keep it up ^^
*XJMATT*
Cool! I'm glad you liked it. I tried to make the drums and synth bass as loud as I could, but it still wouldn't pull through. Damn.
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Hmmm... I liked part one a lot more. Everything in this song is trying to overpower the other. The pad did overpower the most though. I also didnt like the arp, try not to use that in all of your songs. But what i did like was the whining sound in the backround, sounded like a voice. Overall, ok song but not the best, also needed major volume tuning.
3/5, sorry but your other version was better!
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Dj-Unknown
Thanks. I knew the sudden change of this song would be its downfall. Oh well. Better luck next time.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
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