Nice work! Still better than I can do in terms of House tracks. And I can say that you can really improve in that genre.
But now, to the not-so-good part. It's clear that you tried to add a bunch of melodies with dat bass. A good thing, but a different bass would sound better imo. And a more pronounced sidechain can add some really interesting effect, just try and experiment! If you wanna continue to post some beats on Soundcloud, that's fine too. I suggest to make one angry beat tho, like, really punchy.
Good luck with your work!