sorry..

... you could do more with fruity loops...much more.....it sounds really close to those standard pattern and instrument preset songs...but i think the producing was fun^^

Nice, but repetetive

This is a nice little loop that could be used as an intro to make an awesome song. I like how it builds up, but then it only lasts a short while and it ends. The song would have been better if you used more instruments, I only counted 4, but it still gives you a creepy sense. Overall, it's not bad.

I gave you a 4/5 and 7/10.

If you want, you can check out my techno/trance song, it might not be good because I'm new to this sort of thing.