Way better than your last one!
You rather focused on the fundamental basics then the fancy stuff.
Could have spiced up the second drop a lil' with a step switch compared to the first one, but that's my subjective opinion.
Way to go!
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Way better than your last one!
You rather focused on the fundamental basics then the fancy stuff.
Could have spiced up the second drop a lil' with a step switch compared to the first one, but that's my subjective opinion.
Way to go!
I like the pensive mood at the beginning and the atmosphere. The percussion is nice and crisp, and the sub-bass and other hiphop influences are incorporated well. The harmonic content is a bit thin, but I like the climax into :58 and the rhythmic content at the drop. The texture is missing some higher-range frequencies, and the minimalism is a bit excessive at times. I like the relaxed bridge with the orchestral instruments at 1:53, and the texture is very well-balanced and clean during this section. The production quality in this piece is strong, but I think there’s room in the mix for some more harmonic content and more compositional risks. Overall, this is a catchy piece with some cool sound design and rhythmic content, but the composition could be a bit more creative and dynamic. Keep at it, Fire-Gold! :)
Mixing, mastering, and balance
2/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1.25/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.25/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.75/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.5/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.75/1
Composite score
7.75/10
I like this ominous feeling in the beginning. That percussion is stealthy and sounds clean. Pretty solid build up and at :58 seconds I smiled like a little girl. Very satisfying. The tempo is solid, the samples are solid, it sounds really polished. And I love that string/piano duet. Yes please! Nice drop in that second section. Maybe go a little further off the deep end next time? Either way, I love it. I'm gonna come check out your youtube channel but I should be doing homework. Thank you for the lovely break.
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