Ugh, not again...

Look, I know Dark Skies was a brilliant theme, but there is already one remix out. Why this? It's basically the same song, but all mucked up to be subpar. Heres my advice:
-Don't finish this song, if you haven't given up already
-Make your own songs
I can't be bothered to see below the surface, but this surface is pretty mucky. You may have already given up. If you did, you made the right choice.

ey yo dis hot

like how everythinlowed together

that sample nice too

and them drums is bangin hard yo, nice

Interesting, but not perfect.

I like the "rolling" drums in the beginning; it kinda sounds like El-P's "Up All Night". I'm not so sure about the melody, though - it's only four notes, no chords or intervals, and it repeats over and over. I understand Joe Beat's philosophy and all; "Dope loop + Dope break = Dope beat", but you only hold one half of the puzzle. Well, maybe more like a quarter; when those cliche crunk kicks and snares came in, I got a little bored. Just keep working at it, throw in some hooks, improve the melody and the drums, and soon, you'll find gold. Peace.