dont smoke its not good for you

...it takes life from you and this track could use a bit more of life... more changes in rhythm, but other than that it's nice (:)

It's a nice piano piece. It's a good performance. A bit by number. But what you have here is a very nice track.

Bring this out with a better line on. cut your reverb in the low end. compression, brighten.

I can hear a song in your 2nd phase, develop that section with a drum. make money.

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