I like the relaxed vibe at the beginning. I would’ve liked to hear a more gradual transition into :14, but the vocals are cute and there’s a good sense of climax into :55. The drop at 1:07 is good, but I’m not sure how well it vibes with the blissful mood of the intro. The production quality here is really good, though, and I like the breakdown at 2:05. It helped add a sense of structural contrast to the piece. I would’ve liked to see a little more harmonic variety during the second half of the piece, but instead it gets a bit repetitive by the end. The rhythmic content during the second drop is fun, although I would’ve liked to hear a proper outro after the drop to wrap up the piece in a more gradual way. Overall, strong work with the progression, mixing and mastering, atmosphere, and mood. My main problems here include the lack of originality in the arrangement, the lack of variety in the harmonies, and the sudden mood changes. Keep at it, Moreweed! :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
2/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1.25/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.5/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.75/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.75/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
1/1
Composite score
8.5/10

I love it:)